2016年3月26日托福写作真题解析

综合写作

　　这次综合写作的话题属于科技类话题

　　总论点：飞机的第一个发明者是不是Whitehead

　　阅读部分：1. 对于第一架飞机的印象是来自于画像(photo reports)，画像都不够真实，且不靠谱;

　　2. 由于设计的一个轮子的一个wing不能飞离地面，第一架飞机飞不起来

　　3. 飞机的引擎engine不够好用。

　　听力部分：1. 由于过去的科技(打印技术)不够发达，没有摄影，只能靠画像来纪录物品，而且飞机的飞的速度快，没有拍到;同时，他总在早上测试飞机，比较暗。所以WH这个人发明的飞机是真的

　　2. 第一架飞机是可以飞起来的，因为有科学家已经用模型做了几次试验了，能飞的很成功，并且完全都是按照设计图设计的。

　　3. 不是Whitehead的问题，因为那时候的科技不够发达，aircraft builder对设计不够了解。有人会去买Whitehead就说明他的设计没问题。引擎其实是很好用的。

　　注意写作时每一点中的矛盾聚焦点所在

　　独立写作

　　Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is often not a good idea to move to a new city or a new country because you will lose old friends.

　　这是一道常考试题。写作构思，该题目为“二选一”类话题(亦可以划为“利弊类”)，即任何可以用“yes”或“no”来回答的话题大多属于这一类写作范畴。该类型话题可以按照“一边倒”或者“让步式”写作结构进行构思：

　　“一边倒”即“开头段-正方理由1-正方理由2-正方理由3-结尾段”;

　　“让步式”即“开头段-正方理由1-正方理由2-正方缺点/反方优点-结尾段”.两种写作方法均可，更推荐“让步段”写作方式，凸显思维的全面性。

　　正式写作前可以分别列出其优缺点

　　Advantages:

　　1. become more independent

　　2. more opportunities to know new friends and establish new relationship

　　3. to have chance to experience new life style

　　Drawbacks:

　　1. may lose contact with old friends

　　2. may encounter urgent problems, without help of old friends.

　　范文赏析

　　Currently, this fast changing world has witnessed great changes in people’s living style: an increasing number of people tend to move to a new city or a new country in the pursuit of their own goals. Although moving to a brand new city would make one feel strange and at loss, its advantages far outweigh its drawbacks. Therefore, it is inappropriate to overstate the relationship between the place and friends.

　　Moreover, moving into a new city or a country has offered us a lot of advantages. New places can widen our horizons and visions, for we are exposed to a different living environment and culture background. With all the things different, we can enjoy different customs, meet the local people, learn a new dialect or foreign language and experience a fresh atmosphere. We can truly feel the real scenery and the first-handed information by strolling around the new place, which would definitely be a different experience by watching it on TV. Thus, new place can bring us new lifestyle and experience.

　　Finally, we can also meet and make new friends with different backgrounds in the new place. We can still share our sorrows and happiness with these new friends as we do with our old friends. Different experiences would surely enrich our life there. Besides, it is rather interesting and colorful to make so many different kinds of friends.

　　In a word, distance cannot set bosom friends apart because of the new technologies. Therefore, the merits of moving to another city are far outweighing its drawbacks.