文书批改：个人简历。TPO小站综合点评及批改意见：总的来说，这份个人简历，相关核心点都是有罗列到的，但要注意一些细节问题，比如EDUCATION BACKGROUND方面，一定要写出具体的GPA。关于得奖经历这块，高中时期的就不要提了。大学期间的奖项，那些班级，团体的，跟申请专业无关的，建议考虑往后挪。先罗列专业活动和经历。实习经历最好要与申请专业相关。

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Mr. XXX(Family Name) XXXX(Last Name)
E-mail: XXXXXXX@gmail.com

EDUCATON BACKGROUND
08/2009-06/2013

College of Software Engineering, XXXXX University
Nanjing, China
Major: Software Engineering

WORK EXPERIENCE
07/2012-01/2013
Intern, Nanjing Xiangbo Software Tech Co. Ltd
Ø Process and sort SQLSERVER documents
Ø Record and report site working status

EXTRACURRICULAR ACTIVITIES
2009-2011
ACM Club
Ø Study mathematics and algorithms
Ø Train for annual ACM competitions
2009 - 2011
Deep Web Search Project
Ø Research on the deep web
Ø Develop deep web search engine in particular field
2010 Summer
Software Project Training 1
Ø Learn to program with MFC
Ø Develop traffic violation enquiry system
2011 Summer
Software Project Training 2
Ø Learn to program with C#
Ø Develop online selling website

HONORS & AWARDS
University
Ø Silver Medal in ACM/ICPC Asia Regional Contest Chengdu Site
Ø Bronze Medal in ACM/ICPC Asia Regional Contest Fuzhou Site
Ø Bronze Medal in ACM/ICPC Asia Invitational Contest Hangzhou Site
Ø The Principal Scholarship in Southeast University
Ø The 2nd Prize in Southeast University Programming Subject Competition

High School
Ø The 1st Prize in National High School Mathematics Competition
Ø The 2nd Prize in Physics Olympiad
Ø The 2nd Prize in Chemistry Olympiad
Ø Prize of MinSheng Bank Subject Competition Award
Ø The 2nd Prize in Southeast University Entrance Exemption Priority

TPO小站综合点评及批改意见：

总的来说，这份个人简历，相关核心点都是有罗列到的，但要注意一些细节问题，比如EDUCATION BACKGROUND方面，一定要写出具体的GPA是多少，也可列出一些擅长的科目。关于得奖经历这块，高中时期的就不要提了。大学期间的奖项，那些班级，团体的，跟申请专业无关的，建议考虑往后挪。先罗列专业活动和经历。实习经历，也是需要尽量讲出自己做过跟申请专业相关的工作内容有哪些。获得了什么技能等等。关于课外活动的介绍，建议先挑一些专业性强的，依次再到娱乐，课外其他方面的。最后，建议将CV尽量控制在一页里面，实在不行就一页半。