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托福分类话题写作每日一练 第134期

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134. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should be required to help with household tasks as soon as they are able to do so. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

参考分析:

"as soon as they are able to do so"有些过于绝对。所以不能同意让孩子太早参加家务活动更好写一些。

  • 尽管让孩子做家务有很多的好处……
  • 让过早参与家务劳动,而不顾孩子的承受能力,可能会导致孩子的逆反心理(antagonistic psychology),反倒达不到教育目的。
  • 要先让孩子明白做家务的好处,让他县甘情愿地去做才能达到教育的目的。

134、同意让儿童做家务
(1)能够让儿童理解父母
(2)能够让儿童发展一些家务技能。有些人很早就会作饭,这很好。
(3)能够让儿童体会到成功和失败的乐趣。作饭做坏了和做好了。

Topic 134 Should children do household tasks?

Should children be required to help with household tasks as soon as they are able to do so? People have different opinions. Some people think that parents can do all the household tasks without children's help, children are still too young to do house work and sometimes they even make things worse. Other people, however, argue that it is very useful for children to take part in the household work. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the second opinion.

In the first place, children may have the sense of contribution when they take part in household tasks. After a child was born, the parents are always the part that gives, such as feeding, changing clothes, and bathing the baby. Others help children because they are too young to do these tasks. When they grow up, they will gradually have the ability to do something, such as washing clothes for themselves, cleaning the room for themselves. If they are required to do what they can do, after finishing their jobs and looking at the result of their jobs, such the clean clothes and the clean room, children will have a strong sense of contribution and success, which will help them form a good personal character.

In the second place, participating the household tasks will teach children how to cooperate with other people. For instance, When doing a house cleaning, one person cannot finish it all by oneself. Different tasks should be divided among several people. For example, dad cleans the windows, mom cleans the kitchen, boys clean the floor and girls decorate the wall. Gradually, children will get to know that they need to cooperate with others to make things done better and faster.

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application [.æpli'keiʃən]

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n. 应用; 申请; 专心
n. 应用软件程序

 
kitchen ['kitʃin]

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n. 厨房,(全套)炊具,灶间

 
contribution [.kɔntri'bju:ʃən]

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concerned [kən'sə:nd]

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antagonistic [æn,tæɡə'nistik,-kəl]

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