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2008年专四作文真题:志愿服务的益处

发布时间:2013-05-18 11:40浏览次数:2287
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题目 The Benefits of Volunteering
说明 December 5th is International Volunteers Day. Since 1985, when the United Nations announced the special day, tens of millions of people around the world have volunteered to help those in needs. China now has 4.5 million registered volunteers who have provided more than 4.5 billion hours of volunteer work. What can you gain from volunteering?
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2.in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details
3.in the last part you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.
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As we all known,the United Nations announced December 5th as International Volunteers Day. Since that day was created,more and more people begin to volunteer to help those who are in needs around the world .Our nation -China also has several million registered volunteers who have brings more than 4.5 billion hours of volunteer work. In fact , volunteer work have many benefits for us.From my perspective,volunteer works are benificial to us and the others also to our society. Volunteer works have positive effect for us and the others.We will gain many happines by helping people.Every peolpe might be fallen into troubles sometimes,when we attend some volunteer works to help those in need ,we will feel happy and satisfied in our heart.On the other hand,Those who are helped by us ,they will feel more optimistic and positive to their life because they experience the goodness of the world. Volunteer works have positive implication to our society.By holding many volunteer activities ,we are conveying the favorable energy to those who has met our volunteer services.In this way, we can absorb many people to join us .More and more people brings their loves、goodness and sincerities to the other people ,our society will have less indifferences and ignores . When our society has less bad qualities,more positive energies,our society will get more beautiful.Therefore, Volunteer works have great good influences to us and our society.We hope more and more people will join it.

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