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2014年初中毕业升学考试英语作文集锦170:Wonderland

发布时间:2015-10-30 17:14浏览次数:1879
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根据提示写一篇短文,词数80词左右。开头已给出,不计人总词数。
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1.昨天你做了个梦,梦见了爱丽丝,她是一个漂亮的女孩。
2. 她带你去了仙境(Wonderland),那里有各种各样的鲜花,她们会说话。
3. 许多小动物在天上飞来飞去,你用尽全力飞,但是失败了。
4. 爱丽丝给了你一件特殊的丝绸外套,你穿上后也能飞得和他们一样高。你多么激动啊!
5. 突然,你不小心掉了下来,你大喊救命……最后你醒了,原来是个梦。


I had a dream of Alice yesterday.
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 I woke up in the end, and it was a dream.
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文章用词灵活多样,高级词汇使用也比较准确;作者在句法层面做的很棒;恰当的使用了过渡词和衔接词,衔接手法做的很棒。

用户练习作文:

Indeed the button drawer solution model argues that every substantive public policy leans towards tailor making their rules to their specific requirements (Kane and Bishop, 2002:51). In this respect, the change of the general reference frameworks due to globalisation or liberalisation or growth of agencies, results into the period that public policy factors dissociate from the megatrends by either opposing or adopting new frameworks to their needs. Here, the institutional landscape is considered to be undertaking changes in the institutional policies (Bacchi, 2009:27). These changes can focus either on maintaining the older institutional structures or on introducing institutional reforms, a case in point being the introduction of new public policy for pairing one-way street network in the high-volume corridors in LA. This can result in the success of reducing traffic congestion at the expense of the actors' communities in particular policies. In other words, the system can kill particular institutions (Adams, Colebatch and Walker, 2015:53-58). However, the very presence of the interplay between the systems, their recognition, and the actors who are responsible for LA institutional policies attributes to the power of establishments in influencing policy outcomes. Therefore, international conventions prefer imposing more rules that aim at complementing the description of the objectives and problems of the state's policies for adoption (Kane and Bishop, 2002:51). Further, while the dynamics of substantive public policies and their internationalization are getting less predictable, the actors' communities involved are increasingly demanding the standard rules that should be protected by relevant international treaties, protocols, and conventions and not just within the national level. As such, the standardization and internationalization of the landscape for substantive policies are prudent in reducing traffic congestion in LA.

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