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2013年5月25日雅思大作文真题TASK2附范文:政府资金支持艺术

发布时间:2013-06-08 00:13浏览次数:2233
要求:
Government money should support more important things rather than artists.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
写作思路
第一段:引入话题,艺术是否该获得政府资金支持
第二段:科学研究与社会服务当然可以明显地提高人民的生活水平,如科技,教育,医疗。但是这些只能满足人们的物质需求。
第三段:政府需要投资艺术,因为:
1. 人类有多重的需求,艺术是表达感情和思想的渠道,原始社会就有艺术形式的存在。艺术不活跃,导致思想僵化,科技和经济发展迟滞。高度文明的社会总是伴随着繁荣的文化和艺术
2. 艺术和文化有地域特点,是国家团结的一个纽带
3. 艺术提供看世界的多重视角,培养人的创造和创新能力
第四段:政府应该既投资社会基础服务,也投资艺术。这样才能创造一个健康有生机的社会.
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An escalating amount of countries, especially the developed regions, invest a large amount of funds in the field of arts. Here follows a controversial issue that the capital is supposed to be used in developing technology, military affairs and social services, such as the education, medical care and public security instead of arts. But no one can underestimate the intangible contribution of arts which breathe passion and vitality to our daily lives. There is no doubt that science and social services are playing vital roles in today’s civilization. Governments pour a sum of taxpayers’ money into defense capability to protect its people from other countries’ attack. And only in this way, can we develop the urban infrastructure. Furthermore, education gives us technique and skills to stay floating in such a competitive society and high end products like mobile phones make our like more convenient. However, the quality of life depends on not only the material level but the spiritual one as well. Arts are the irreplaceable part of man’s life which is able to purify our soul with different ways such as, painting, music and dancing. To a certain extent, arts are another kind of language that improves the cultural communication among a variety of nations. It symbolizes the prosperity and wealth of a country and arts have already turned into a kind of occupation offering many job opportunities. To make a final point, arts are the catalyst for economic development sometimes. As we all know, the first structure rebuilt in Germany after the Second World War is not the factory and government building, but the theatre as they clearly realized the significance of arts. In a nutshell, the material basis, including military affairs, education and industrial development, make our lives more comfortable. And at the same time, individuals and people cannot live without arts which provide us the energy in the spiritual level.

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