Revision of Essay DraftsGood morning everyone. In today's lecture, I'm going to talk about how to revise essay drafts and give you some tips as well.The initial revision should, of course, focus on the essay as a whole.You'd ask yourself: do I reach my writing objective?Does my essay directly answer the question? Is my main idea clear?In order to answer these questions, what you need to do first is to revise for content.The typical rough draft may have too little and too much content all at the same time.It will have touched the surface of some portions of the essay without providing adequate explanation or convincing detail.At the same time, it may have discussed things that do not contribute significantly to your major points.So, what is a good essay then?A good essay eliminates irrelevant material while includes all the information necessary to your main point.Your reader needs sufficient evidence to accept what you are saying.So, you have to make sure you have adequately developed and supported your main idea.
