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专四写作五大高招: 试着改变一下每个句子的开头

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试着改变一下每个句子的开头

许多学生在写作中倾向于用与人有关系的词性,用名词和代词作为句子的开头,如 People,We,I,He,They,She等。但这种开头见多了,难免让人厌倦。试比较:

A. People throughout the country have greatly demanded all kinds of nutritious food.
B. There is a great demand across the country for all kinds of nutritious food.
第一句改用非人称名词作为主语开头,第二句则用there +be句型开头。这样既改变了主语+谓语+宾语单调句型,又把想强调的意思突出出来。实际上,为了把文章写得生动活泼,除了用主语开头外,还可以用句子的其他成分开头。

1. 以形容词或形容词组开头 如:①Mary was very pleased and telephoned her mother.→Pleased,Mary telephoned her mother.②The girl,hungry and thirsty,went back home.→Hungry and thirsty,the girl went back home.

2. 以副词开头 如:The child stayed there quietly.→Quietly,the child stayed there.

3. 以不定式开头 如:He got up very early to catch the bus.→To catch the bus,he got up very early.

4. 以现在分词或过去分词开头 如:①I was filled with anticipation when I came home from school that dark winter's day so long ago.→Coming home from school that dark winter's day so long ago,I was filled with anticipation. ②If you give me enough time,I can do it well.→Given enough time,I can do it well.

5. 以介词短语开头 如:Chester like many other adventurers had experienced fear and conquered it.→Like many other adventurers,Chester had experienced fear and conquered it.

6. 以同位语开头 如:Sue,our monitor,always likes giving suggestions to everybody.→Our monitor,Sue,always likes giving suggestions to everybody.

7. 以从句开头 如:①Francis had already surprised his friends several times before he sailed round the world single-handed.→Before he sailed round the world single-handed,Francis had already surprised his friends several times.②You will greatly improve your finished product if you have a quality control inspection.→If you have a quality control inspection, you will greatly improve your finished product.

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experienced [iks'piəriənst]

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adj. 有经验的

 
thirsty ['θə:sti]

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adj. 口渴的,渴望的

 
sue [su:]

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vt. 控告,起诉
vi. 请求,追求,起诉

 
nutritious [nju:'triʃəs]

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adj. 有营养的,滋养的

 
control [kən'trəul]

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n. 克制,控制,管制,操作装置
vt. 控制

 
inspection [in'spekʃən]

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n. 检查,视察

联想记忆
quality ['kwɔliti]

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n. 品质,特质,才能
adj. 高品质的

 
anticipation [æn.tisi'peiʃən]

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n. 预期,预料

 


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