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1 假定你是高三学生李华，从网上获悉一家国际青少年自愿者组织正在全球招募暑期志愿者. 请写一封电子邮件申请参加.主要内容如下： 1.写信目的； 2.自我介绍； 3.希望获准. 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯. Dear Sir or Madam， ... With all my best regards. Yours sincerely， Li Hua.

参考答案：Dear Sir or Madam，
I’m writing this to lether to apply for the job as a volunteer that you have advertised on theInternet.In my opinion，not only can volunteer work help me enrich my knowledgeand experience，but also it can help those who are inneed live better and become more confident.
I will graduate from seniorhigh school in June.In the past，I took part in many social activities in which Iperformed well and gained rich experience.My interestand skill in English，communication and teamwork contribute tomy application for the job.
I would appreciate aninterview at your convenience.I’m lookingforward to hearing from you in the future.
With all my bestregards.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
系统解析：
本文是一篇提纲作文.根据所提供的材料，写一封电子邮件，申请参加暑期志愿者.写作要点包括：写信的目的；自我介绍，希望获准.写作时应以一般现在时为主.人称以第一人称和第三人称为主.重要短语：apply for sth （申请），be in need （需要），graduate from （从…毕业），take part in （参加），gain rich experience （获得丰富的经验），contribute to（促成，有利于），appreciate sth （感激…），hear from sb （收到某人的来信）.

2 假设你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack来信说对中国文化很感兴趣尤其喜欢唐诗（Tang poetry）.请你给他写一封邮件，提出学习建议并表达祝愿，内容包括： 1.唐诗地位及影响； 2.列举著名诗人； 3.欢迎来华交流. 注意： 1.词数100左右： 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数. Dear Jack， .... Yours， Li Hua.

参考答案：Dear Jack，
I’m glad to know that you’re interested in Chinese culture，especially Tang poetry.As you know，Tang poetry is a very important literary form which enjoys great popularity in China.They represent the traditional Chinese culture and arepopular all over the world.
As the golden age of poems，the Tang Dynasty produced many outstanding poets，among whom Li Bai，Du Fu，and Bai Juyi were the most well-known in history.
When it comes to poems，you’d better grasp the meaning firstly，then try to recite the whole poem.If you choose the right method and work hard，your learning ability can beimproved.
Welcome to China and I’m looking forward to your view about the Tangpoems.
Yours，
Li Hua
系统解析：
本文是一篇提纲作文.根据所提供的材料信息，写一封邮件，向英国笔友Jack提出关于中国唐诗学习的建议并表达祝愿.
写作要点包括：1.唐诗地位及影响； 2.列举著名诗人； 3.欢迎来华交流.
写作时应以一般现在时为主.人称以第二和第三人称为主.

重要短语：

be interested in（感兴趣），enjoy great popularity（很受欢迎），in history（历史上），When it comes to…（当谈到，涉及到…），try to do sth （努力做某事），look forward to …（期望…），welcome to sp （欢迎到某地）.
高分句型:
1，As you know，Tang poetry is a very important literary form which enjoys great popularity in China.
这是由which引导的限制性定语从句，先行词为literary form，which在句中作主语，对literary form进行补充说明--enjoy great popularity in China（在中国享誉盛名）.
2，As the golden age of poems，the Tang Dynasty produced many outstanding poets，among whom Li Bai，Du Fu，and Bai Juyi were the most well-known in history.
这是由whom引导的非限制性定语从句，用来修饰前面的many outstanding poets，对前面的内容进行补充说明，表示“在这些杰出的诗人之中”.

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