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Write an essay based on the drawing. In your writing, you should
1) describe the drawing briefly,
2) interpret its intended meaning, and
3) give your comments.

You should write about 150 words.

  • 参考答案:As can be seen, an official is lying on an official seal. Another man is building four walls around him with piles of money. Under the picture the caption reads: "Bribery money? The walls of the jail!" The intention of this picture, I think, is to offer a cautionary tale about the criminal nature of accepting bribery. This is a timely reminder for those who are tempted to trade power with money.
    As far as I am concerned, bribery is a serious illegal act that must be prevented. For one thing, officials, especially those with decision-making power, should be constantly reminded about the consequences of accepting bribery. For another thing, a systemic scheme of making officials' financial status accessible to general public is helpful in keeping them in check. This mechanism is effective in deterring their officers from doing monkey business.
    In short, in fighting against bribery, raising awareness of the harm it does and making officials' financial information available to all are two necessary measures.
  • 系统解析:
    这幅图刻画了一名男子用贿赂的金钱在砌监狱的墙,墙内一名官员躺在他的官印上。从图解可以看出,本图旨在谴责受贿行为,提醒人们这是犯罪行为。根据这一思路,并按照题目要求,全文可以安排如下:
    第一段简要描绘图片,并指出图片的意图:提醒人们收受贿赂是刑事罪行。
    第二段提出个人看法:贿赂是恶劣的违法行为,必须阻止。其一,提醒官员收受贿赂的后果能在一定程度上阻止贿赂。其二,官员财产公开机制有助于阻止贿赂行为的发生。
    第三段总结全文。
    精彩语句:
    1. The intention of this picture, I think, is to offer a cautionary tale about...(指出图片的警示作用)
    我认为,该图意在用警示故事指出……
    2. For one thing, officials, especially those with decision-making power, should be constantly reminded about the consequences of accepting bribery.(给出具体建议)
    首先,应不断提醒官员——尤其是有决策权的官员——收受贿赂的后果。
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