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Write an essay based on the chart. In your writing, you should
1) interpret the chart, and
2) give your comments.

You should write about 150 words.

  • 参考答案:The bar chart tells us that 81.0% of the graduates have tried online application to find a job, followed by job fairs (76.8%) and campus recruitment (64.1%). The three least picked options to look for a job are through previous graduates, sitting the civil servant exams, and through family or social connections. Contrary to this, the most effective way to get a job is through family or social connections, followed by campus recruitment and job fairs.
    The above results may give future graduates some tips on how to secure a job offer. First, there is no need to send out tons of resumes online, because the successful rate is not that high. The time taken for online application could be better spent on preparing for campus recruitment and job fairs. Second, family or social connections seem to be the best chance for graduates. Therefore, it's advisable for students to build up their social network through different kinds of activities, which may be helpful in their future job hunting.
  • 系统解析:
    该图表显示了大学生找工作的方式及其相应的成效。从图表可见,学生尝试最多的渠道并不一定最有效。根据这一思路,并按照题目要求,全文可以安排如下:
    第一段描述图表。
    第二段提出个人看法:调查结果对学生找工作给予两点启示。其一,学生不必盲目海投。其二,学生要多参加社交活动,扩大人脉。
    第三段总结全文。
    精彩语句:
    1. The above results may give future graduates some tips on how to secure a job offer.(指出图表的意义)
    以上的调查结果给未来的毕业生就找到工作给予了一些提示。
    2. Therefore, it's advisable for students to build up their social network through different kinds of activities, which may be helpful in their future job hunting.(提出建议)
    因此,学生应通过各种活动来建立人际关系,这也许有助于他们未来的求职。
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