Write an essay based on the chart. In your writing, you should
1) interpret the chart, and
2) give your comments.
You should write about 150 words.
参考答案:The chart shows different career choices among different degree holders. As can be seen, 67.2% of the junior college holders and 61.9% of the undergraduates tend to find a job first before hopping to a better one, while 43.4% of the postgraduates and 56.9% of the Ph.D. holders want their ideal jobs at one go. In terms of setting up business, 11.8% of the Ph.D. holders say they will do so, compared to a mere 1.9% of the postgraduates. Finally, only a tiny portion of the respondents would pursue further study, with 1.3% of the associates, compared with 5.9% of the Ph.D. holders.
From the survey results we can see how educational background heavily influence people's attitude towards their career. Apparently, the more advanced one's degree is, the more initiative one has. That is why Ph.D. holders are more perseverant about their ideal jobs and more willing to start their own businesses.
From what is discussed above, we can see that the old maxim "Knowledge is power" still applies today.
系统解析:
该图表显示了不同学历的毕业生的不同择业观。从图表可见,学历越高选择理想职业的决心越强烈。根据这一思路,并按照题目要求,全文可以安排如下:
第一段描述图表。
第二段提出个人看法:学历越高、主动权越大。
第三段总结全文:图表印证了知识就是力量的古训。
精彩语句:
1. Apparently, the more advanced one's degree is, the more initiative one has.(用 the more... the more...句型来表示文凭的作用)
显而易见,一个人的学历越高,他的主动权就越大。
2. From what is discussed above, we can see that the old maxim "Knowledge is power" still applies today.(引用格言来进行总结)
综上所述,我们可以看出,“知识就是力量”,这一老格言现在还很管用。
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Write an essay based on the chart. In your writing, you should
1) interpret the chart, and
2) give your comments.
You should write about 150 words.
参考答案:The bar chart shows the reasons why it is hard for a college graduate to find a job. The overwhelming majority of the employers (57.1%) say that it is because college students have no hands-on experience. It is followed by overreaching expectations of students (42.3%) and financial crisis (36.9%). The three least identified reasons are ineffective employment policies (8.8%), overly demanding requirements of employers (9.1%) and industries being at the lower end (13.8%). The remaining three reasons are sandwiched in the middle, namely, students not being hardworking enough (33.7%), a huge population of graduates (23.4%) and mismatched majors (19.2%).
The results, more or less, objectively reflect the hard time graduates experienced over the past few years. Therefore, it's high time students worked on their competitive edge—working experience during their college years. Work placements, internships, part-time jobs or even volunteering can help students improve their job prospect. Universities, at the same time, are advised to systematically support their students, by offering career consultancy and a wealth of hands-on opportunities.
系统解析:
该图表显示了用人单位认为大学生就业难的各种原因。从图表可见,较多用人单位认为大学生就业难主要由大学生自身因素造成。根据这一思路,并按照题目要求,全文可以安排如下:
第一段描述图表。
第二段提出个人看法:大学生应努力提高自己的实践能力,同时学校应给学生提供必要的支持。
精彩语句:
1. The results, more or less, objectively reflect the hard time graduates experienced over the past few years.(指出图表的含义)
该调查结果或多或少客观地反映了毕业生近几年来遇到的就业难问题。
2. Therefore, it's high time students worked on their competitive edge—working experience during their college years.(对大学生提出建议)
因此,大学生是时候要创造自己的竞争优势了——求学期间的工作经验。