Write an essay based on the chart. In your writing, you should
1) describe the diagram, and
2) give your comments.
参考答案:The pie chart shows to what extent college graduates are satisfied with their jobs. As can be seen, half of the respondents are not satisfied with their jobs. A further 12% of the graduates are very dissatisfied with their jobs, thinking of which as absolutely not the ones they want. On the other hand, 28% of the graduates find their jobs rather satisfying and another 10% say that they are very satisfied, because they are doing exactly what they want to do.
The survey results reveal the unsatisfactory attitude of college graduates towards their jobs. Why does the unsatisfactory rate stand at this alarmingly high level? Probably, students have not been fully prepared during their university life. Many students harbor the preconception that a university degree will immediately guarantee a decent job. Unfortunately, this rosy dream is no longer the case. Therefore, students are advised to take some social practice when they are in college, and try to come to terms with the reality via some hands-on experience.
系统解析:
该图表显示了大学毕业生就业满意度的情况。从图表可见,过半数大学生对自己的就业情况不太满意。根据这一思路,并按照题目要求,全文可以安排如下:
第一段分别描述图表中的四个数据。
第二段提出个人看法:不满意的原因在于大学生认为大学文凭能帮他们找到好工作,结果发现事与愿违。建议大学生多参加社会实践,以更好地适应社会。
精彩语句:
1. The pie chart shows to what extent...(总体描述图表内容)
饼图显示了……度的情况。
2. Many students harbor the preconception that a university degree will immediately guarantee a decent job.(分析学生对工作不满的原因)
许多学生一厢情愿地以为大学文凭能立即为他们找到一份体面的工作。
3. Therefore, ... are advised to...(提出建议)
因此,建议……
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Write an essay based on the chart. In your writing, you should
1) interpret the chart, and
2) give your comments.
You should write about 150 words.
参考答案:The bar chart shows how people think of their jobs. 39.6% of the respondents are satisfied with their jobs, 33.3% passionate, 27.1% happy and 21.4% comfortable. There are, however, some negative attitudes towards their jobs. For instance, 35.4% of the respondents are tired of them, followed by 5.2% finding their jobs boring. Only 2.6% of the respondents think it is a torture to work.
The survey results reveal that people are generally satisfied with their jobs, which could be explained in the following aspects. First of all, tremendous economic development has been achieved in China over the past three decades. This brings a host of promising job opportunities for Chinese people. Besides, with greater mobility in China, those who used to be confined in remote areas are now able to get access to more developed cities in China. Given the diverse options, people are highly dedicated to and more positive about their jobs.
In general, most people are quite positive about their jobs, which is a good phenomenon.
系统解析:
该图表显示了受访者对工作的情绪感受。从图表可见,排名靠前的选项大多是比较正面的情绪和态度。根据这一思路,并按照题目要求,全文可以安排如下:
第一段描述图表:从正面情绪和负面情绪两个方面分别描述受访者的态度。
第二段提出个人看法:由于经济发展和社会流动性增强,工作机会增多,使人们对工作更投入,满意度更高。
第三段总结全文。
精彩语句:
1. 39.6% of the respondents are satisfied with their jobs, 33.3% passionate, 27.1% happy and 21.4% comfortable. There are, however, some negative attitudes towards their jobs.(详细描述图表)
有 39.6%的受访者表示满足,33.3%的人表示热情,27.1%的人表示幸福,21.4%表示舒适。
2. The survey results reveal that people are generally satisfied with their jobs, which could be explained in the following aspects.(指出图表的大意,并引出相关的原因)
该调查结果显示人们对自己的工作普遍表示满意,这可以从以下方面来解释。