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1 In some universities, students waste a lot in their daily life. Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: Reduce Waste on Campus You are to write in three parts. In the first part, describe the phenomenon of waste on campus. In the second part, state specifically what your opinion is. In the last part, give your suggestions.

参考答案：Reduce Waste on Campus
Nowadays, there is an increasingly serious phenomenon on campus-waste. Rows of lights glare in studentless classrooms, residue of rice and dishes jam in the waste buckets, taps of water weep with nobody doing washing around...
Such sights are so common yet so serious that it is high time that they were eliminated, because now we are living in a world short of fresh water and it is not exaggerating to say that every drop of water is precious. And although many of us don't have to worry about the lack of food any more, there are still millions of people who are starving somewhere in the world. If we do not cherish things we have today, sooner or later we will be short of them, since many resources cannot be recycled.
To reduce waste on campus, everyone should discipline himself: Turn off the light when you are the last to leave the classroom. Use metal or plastic chopsticks instead of disposable ones—and eat up! Keep a teacup in your school bag rather than throw each bottle away after it becomes empty! Just remember that your little actions will contribute a lot to reducing waste.
系统解析：
范文点评：
本题属于“给定观点型”作文，涉及的题材是“校园学习”。题目要求考生对“大学校园浪费现象”进行分析，并提出自己的建议。根据题目要求，可谋篇布局如下：
开头：大学校园浪费现象日益严重。
主体：阐述杜绝浪费的必要性。
1.目前我们许多的资源都短缺，比如水、食物等。
2.如果不杜绝浪费，那么将来许多资源都无法循环再生。
结尾：杜绝浪费，从我做起：当不用电时，关掉电源；随身携带杯子……
句法点评：
1.Such sights are so common yet so serious that it is high time that...（首段指出某种社会现象并提出建议）
这些现象是如此普遍却又如此严重，是时候……
2.If we do not cherish things we have today, sooner or later we will be short of them, since many resources cannot be recycled.（正文通过环保的重要性）
如果我们今天不珍惜所有，在不久的将来，我们也会失去它们，因为许多资源都不能再循环。
3.To ... everyone should discipline himself: ...（结尾段提出建议）
为了……，人人都应该从我做起：……
4.Just remember that your little actions will contribute a lot to...（结尾段提出号召）
切记：你的这些小行动都对……有着重要意义。

2 Many people believe that a test of spoken English is necessary for college students, but others don't agree. What do you think? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary? You are to write in three parts. In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is. In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your opinion. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

参考答案：Is a Test of Spoken English Necessary?
A test of spoken English has been included as an optional component of the College English Test (CET). This will undoubtedly arouse people's enthusiasm for spoken English. But is spoken English really so important as to be included in CET? Different people have different opinions. As far as I am concerned, language is used for communication. It's necessary to hold a test of spoken English in college.
For these years, little attention has been paid to spoken English. Some people have done extremely well in written English tests, but they may be at a loss at what to say when they meet a native English speaker. What's the value of learning English if they cannot communicate with English-speaking people, or cannot express themselves smoothly? Such a test will certainly inspire more and more people to practice spoken English, and thus improve their oral ability. What's more, the result in a test of spoken English can better illustrate people's English proficiency, which may help college students well present themselves in their future job-hunting.
To conclude, spoken English is as important as written English. A test of spoken English without doubt does good to students' language skil1.
系统解析：
范文点评：
本题属于“观点选择型”作文，涉及的题材是“校园学习”。题目要求考生对“英语口语测试是否必要”提出个人的看法。按照题目要求，可谋篇布局如下：
开头：由社会现象入题，不同人对“英语口语考试是否必要”的看法不一。
主体：表明自己的立场，并从两方面阐述理由。
1.多年来，大学生对英语口语的重视度比较小。
2.英语口语考试更能检测人们对英语的熟练度。
结尾：作总结，重申英语口语考试对学生的语言技能有帮助。
句法点评：
1. ...will undoubtedly arouse people's enthusiasm for...（首段说明某事对人们的影响）
毫无疑问，……将点燃人们……的热情。
2.Some people have done extremely well in..., but they may be at a loss at...（正文分析某种人的情况）
有些人可能在……方面做得很好，但可能对……不知所措。
3.What's the value of... if...?（正文假设某种情形）
如果……，那么……又有什么价值呢？

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