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1 The deforestation problem exists in many places in the world. More and more forests are damaged nowadays, thus causing such natural disaster as landslide. It is urgent for us to protect the forests. Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: How to Save Our Forests? You are to write in three parts. In the first part, state clearly what your view is. In the second part, support your view with appropriate reasons. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.

参考答案：How to Save Our Forests?
Driven by economic benefits, many people are cutting down trees and replace them with economic crops. The short-sighted action might gain them some quick money, but in the end, they will suffer the consequences, resulted from deforestation. To save our forests, I think we should enact more stringent laws and develop a modem agriculture industry.
First of all, the punishment of illegal logging should be more severe. In China, it is reported that illegal logging could be punished by financial penalty, to the amount 5-10 times of the value of the tree. In Holland, however, logging trees illegally may face up to 2-year imprisonment and a fine of 79,000 Euros. From this comparison, we can see that Chinese laws and regulations about protecting trees could be more serious by increasing fines and imprisonment. Secondly, to discourage people from felling trees to make way for crops, we should develop a modem agriculture industry, featuring high efficiency and productivity. If we adopt new breeding and management technologies to increase the productivity per hectare, fanners will not cut down trees to make room for the economic crops.
In conclusion, saving our forests depends on more serious laws and enhanced agriculture technology.
系统解析：
范文点评：
本题属于“问题解决型”作文，涉及的题材是“生态环境”。该题要求考生对“如何拯救我们的森林”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求，可谋篇布局如下：
开头：从砍树以种经济作物入题，指出拯救森林应该推行更严厉的法律，并发展现代化农业。
主体：阐述原因。
1. 非法砍伐的惩罚力度应该加大。对比中国和荷兰在惩罚非法砍伐的惩罚差异。
2. 要避免人们为了种植经济作物而砍伐树木，我们就要发展高效和高产量的现代农业。
结尾：要拯救我们的森林取决于更严厉的法律和提高农业技术。
句法点评：
1. The short-sighted action might gain them some quick money, but in the end, they will suffer the consequences, resulted from deforestation.(先扬后抑）
这种短视的做法可能会让他们赚一些快钱，但是最终他们要自尝砍伐森林的恶果。
2. From this comparison, we can see that...(正文通过对比而得出结论）
通过这一对比，我们可发现……

2 Many people believe that the best way to solve the world's environmental problems is increasing the price of the fuel. To what extend do you agree or disagree? Which side do you agree with? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: Shall We Increase the Fuel Price to Solve Environmental Problems? You are to write in three parts. In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is. In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your opinion. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

参考答案：Shall We Increase the Fuel Price to Solve Environmental Problems?
Climate change, global warming, sand storms and deforestation are common environmental problems looming large over mankind. To solve these environmental threats, some people suggest that we should increase the fuel price. I, however, do not agree with this so-called "one-size-fits-all" solution.
First of all, environmental problems are caused by multiple factors, some of which could not be controlled by simply increasing the fuel price. For example, the problem of sand storms is resulted from deforestation, with little to do with fuel consumption. No matter how high the fuel price will be, those loggers are still devoted to felling trees. In this case, a carefully laid-out regulation to stipulate a monthly quota of trees to be felled down is a way more effective than increasing the fuel price. Secondly, pushing up the fuel price might lead to a vicious competition for resources, which ultimately hurt the environment. If the fuel price is very high and the petrol business is very lucrative, many enterprises will compete for the resources to make fuel. This will lead to the over exploitation of fossil fuels and exhaust the limited reserve.
In conclusion, raising the petrol price is not a silver bullet for all environmental problems. We need more specific and tailored-made solutions for various environmental issues.
系统解析：
范文点评：
本题属于“立场选择型”作文，涉及的题材是“生态环境”。该题要求考生对“应否提高燃油价格来解决环境问题”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求，可谋篇布局如下：
开头：从各种环保问题入题，指出不认同这种所谓的“一刀切”的解决方法。
主体：阐述原因。
1. 环境问题实质上是有多个因素造成的，其中的一些因素无法单凭涨燃料价格来解决。举沙尘暴为例。
2. 推高燃料价格会导致恶性抢夺资源，最终还是对环境不利。
结尾：重申观点，提高油价并非解决所有环境问题的灵丹妙药。
句法点评：
1. First of all, ... problems are caused by multiple factors, some of which could not be controlled by simply...(阐述某问题有多重原因，不能用单一方法解决）
首先，……问题实质上是由多个因素造成的，其中的一些因素无法单凭……来解决。
2. This will lead to... and...(指出不良后果）
这样会导致……和……

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