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1 There are plenty of options available for spreading news, such as newspapers, radio, TV, the Internet and so on. According to your option what is the best media to use? Why? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: The Best Media to Use You are to write in three parts. In the first part, of your article you should clearly present your view. In the second part, you should support your opinion with appropriate details. In the last part, you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or summary.

参考答案：The Best Media to Use
We are now living in a time when information is explosive. It seems that we are somewhat overwhelmed by a huge variety of information. As far as I am concerned, I think the best media to spread news is the Internet.
First of all, the Internet is a unique platform that involves both news senders and receivers. Traditional media, such as newspaper, radio and TV, are actually dominated by news senders. This is a one-way street and not beneficial to spreading news. While with the help of the Internet, we can receive news and send out news. What's more, we can comment on the news, which gives life to that piece of information and helps spread it among a certain community. Secondly, the Internet enables people to access news instantaneously. In terms of the speed of spreading news, the Internet is the best media to use. Unlike newspapers, which are published once per day, the Internet could update the news online at any time. We are only a mouse click away from the latest news, which actually guarantees the "newness" of the news.
In conclusion, the Internet is the best channel to inform people about news, because it is a two-way street that involves both news receivers and senders, and because it is an accessible source that could be updated whenever we want.
系统解析：
范文点评：
本题属于“自由发挥型”作文，涉及的题材是“科学技术”。该题要求考生对“最好用的媒介”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求，可谋篇布局如下：
开头:从时代背景入题，指出传播信息的最好媒体是网络。
主体：阐述原因。
1. 网络是一个独特的平台，融合了信息的发布者和接收者，不同于传统单向媒体。
2. 网络能让人们即时获取信息。比较传统媒体和网络的传播速度。
结尾：重申观点，网络是传播消息的最好渠道。
句法点评：
1. What's more, we can comment on the news, which gives life to that piece of information and helps spread it among a certain community.(指出网络媒介的最特别之处）
而且，我们可以对消息进行评论，这给信息赋予了生命力，有助于它在一个特定的群体里得到散布。
2. Unlike newspaper, which is published once per day, the Internet could update the news online at any time.(对比手法）
与每天只出刊一次的报纸不同，网络能随时更新消息。

2 With the increasing use of mobile phones and computers, fewer people write letters. Some people think that letter writing will completely disappear in the near future. Do you agree or disagree? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: Will Letter Writing Disappear? You are to write in three parts. In the first part, state specifically what your opinion is. In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your opinion. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

参考答案：Will Letter Writing Disappear?
Centuries ago, when people received love letters from afar, they would feel rejoiced and excited. Now, love letters are mostly replaced by text message or phone calls. Some people think that letter writing will be discarded by time. I, however, think that letter writing will remain.
First of all, letter writing feels more real than typing or speech-to-text technology. When we write across the paper, the texture of the paper and the shape of letters instantly send signals to our senses. We can actually feel the subtle reaction between our hand, pen and paper. When we read letters, the same feeling takes place when we touch the paper and recognized the handwriting. On the contrary, when we send text messages to each other, we cannot feel the texture of the pen and paper. Secondly, letter writing has an aesthetic function, which could not be replaced by technology. When we write letters, the way we structure the shapes, dot the "i" s and cross the "t"s tells us about the aesthetic attitude of a particular person. If we send texts, the fonts of letters are finite, and hardly individualized.
In conclusion, despite the ever changing communication technology, letter writing will not disappear. It will stay as an important channel to connect feelings and an aesthetic way to express oneself.
系统解析：
范文点评：
本题属于“立场选择型”作文，涉及的题材是“科学技术”。该题要求考生对“写信是否会消失”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求，可谋篇布局如下：
开头：从情信的变迁入题，指出书信会存在下去。
主体：阐述原因。
1. 书信与打字、语音转文字等技术相比感觉更真。详述质地与感官刺激。
2. 书信还有美学的功能，体现个人的态度，这是技术无法代替的。
结尾：重申观点，书信是联系情感的重要渠道，也是一个表达自我的审美途径。
句法点评：
1. When we read letters, the same feeling takes place when we touch the paper and recognized the handwriting.(描绘书信给人带来的感受）
当我们在阅读信件时，我们触碰到纸张、辨认出字迹，类似的感觉也会产生。
2. If we send texts, the fonts of letter are finite, and hardly individualized.(指出发短信的弊端）
如果我们发短信，字体是有限的，难以体现个性化。

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