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1 Many college students frown on the homework of writing a composition, because they don't know how to arrange the sentences or what to write down. Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: How to Write a Good Essay? You are to write in three parts: In the first part, state specifically what your idea is. In the second part, provide one or two reasons to support your idea or describe your idea. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or a summary.

参考答案：How to Write a Good Essay?
College students are no strangers to term paper and writing assignment, but they are also very familiar with the anxiety incurred by the thought of writing. Actually, to write a good essay requires two steps: read extensively and think actively.
First of all, reading extensively enables students to be sensitive with dictions and rhetoric. Usually, students complain that they cannot find the right words to express their feelings or thoughts. This problem could be solved by immersing oneself in a wealth of reading materials. For instance, if a term paper about Western Literature is due in three months, you may want to spend at least the first month reading novels of your interest and academic papers on the particular novels. Along the way, you can accumulate many expressions, which will add to your final essay. Second, reading without thinking is like sailing without a compass. While reading, you have to constantly think how the author comes to the conclusion. Are there any logical lapses? The more you think about what you read, the more skillful you are in analyzing problems. Gradually, you have different perspectives into a certain matter.
In conclusion, to write a good composition is making a delicious dish. Reading extensively gives you a lot of ingredients, while thinking actively tells you how to produce the flavor.
系统解析：
范文点评：
本题属于“问题解决型”作文，涉及的题材是“校园学习”。该题要求考生对“如何写出好文章”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求，可谋篇布局如下：
开头：从学生对写作文而焦虑入题，指出写好作文需要两个步骤：广泛阅读和积极思考。
主体：阐述原因。
1.广泛阅读能提高学生对措辞和修辞的敏感度。以写课程论文为例。
2.阅读时候思考的重要性：阅读而不思考就像在海上航行而不带指南针。
结尾：重申观点，广泛阅读和积极思考能帮助我们写出好作文。
句法点评：
1.Second, reading without thinking is like sailing without a compass.（比喻手法）
其次，阅读而不思考就像在海上航行而没有指南针。
2.While reading, you have to constantly think how the author comes to the conclusion.（阐述阅读的方法）
阅读的时候，你要不断思考作者是如何得出结论的。

2 Some cultures highly value the old age, while other cultures value the youth. Which is true in your culture? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: The Old Age/The Youth Is Highly Valued You are to write in three parts. In the first part, you should clearly present your view. In the second part, you should support your opinion with appropriate details. In the last part, you should bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

参考答案：The Old Age Is Highly Valued
In Chinese culture, old age means experience and insight. Young people are taught to respect the elderly and even revere them. That is why I think the old age is highly valued in Chinese society.
First of all, in working places, promotion is usually based on seniority. In many government positions, we could notice the hierarchy where aged people are on the top while young people are usually at the bottom. This hierarchy is always respected and few people are willing to upset it. Secondly, aged practitioners are usually seen as authorities in their own fields. For instance, many patients prefer to visit a 70-year-old Traditional-Chinese-Medicine doctor with no formal education, instead of a 35-year-old one with a PhD degree, because they think the older the doctor is, the better medicine he will prescribe. This belief is also true in selecting a surgeon. People tend to choose aged surgeon to perform operations, because they are deemed as the best in the field. Why no one worry that aged surgeon, with potential trembling hands, could mess up an operation? Because deep down in their mind, old age is more valuable.
In conclusion, Chinese people value the old age more than the youth Even though youth means possibilities and potentials, Chinese people recognize old age more.
系统解析：
范文点评：
本题属于“立场选择型”作文，涉及的题材是“文化教育”。该题要求考生对“年长者还是年轻人受到重视”提出个人的意见。按照题目的要求，可谋篇布局如下：
开头：从中国文化背景入题，指出中国的社会比较重视年纪大的人。
主体：阐述原因。
1. 在工作场合，晋升通常与年资挂钩。举公务员为例。
2. 年长的执业人士被认为是该领域的权威。举中医师和外科医生为例。
结尾：尽管年轻意味着机会多、潜力无限，但是中国人还是服老多一些。
句法点评：
1. In Chinese culture, old age means experience and insight.（说明中国文化里年长的价值）
在中国的文化里，年纪大就意味着有经验、有见识。
2. In many government positions, we could notice the hierarchy where aged people are on the top while young people are usually at the bottom.（举例说明中国社会更重视年长者）
在许多政府部门的职位，我们都看到这样的等级架构：年长者往往在顶层，年轻人通常在下层。

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