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1 Many people think name is very important for a person, but others don't agree. Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: The Importance of a Name You are to write in three parts. In the first part, state what people think about names. In the second part, analyze people's different opinions. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

参考答案：The Importance of a Name
Sometimes people ponder for months just to think of a good name for their children or for their businesses. Does a nice name really promise a glorious future? People's opinions differ greatly over this issue.
Some believe that a name is no more than a sign. It serves its purpose perfectly as long as it is used conveniently by others. However, others argue that a name has a magic power as to alter people's impression on and attitude towards the named. One compelling argument involves the renaming of some Chinese Laozihao (old domestic brands). Facing the would-be increasingly bleak business situation last year, six Chinese old brands decided to give themselves new English names. Compared with their old English names, the new ones have given prominence to the history of the brands, while giving English speakers an idea of what they are or what they sel1. Therefore, with a new international appearance, the traditional brands have made themselves more popular with customers both at home and abroad.
As far as I'm concerned, to a certain degree, a name does create a vivid image in people's mind, resulting either in fondness or dislike. Thus, one should always be serious at choosing names.
系统解析：
范文点评：
本题是一篇“给定观点型”作文，涉及的题材是“社会热点”。题目要求考生对名字/名称的重要性做出评述，并表达自己的观点。根据题目要求，可谋篇布局如下：
开头：简述人们对名字/名称的重要性看法不一。
主体：具体写两种不同的观点。写作时可以侧重其中一种。
1.有人认为名字只是一个符号。
2.有人认为名字有着不可思议的力量。举一些中国的老字号重新起名字的例子。
结尾：总结全文，突出中心观点。
句法点评：
1.Sometimes people ponder for months just to...（首段表明现象）
有时候人们冥思苦想好几个月，就是为了……
2.It serves its purpose perfectly as long as...（正文指出实现某种目的的条件）
只要……，它的目的就能很好地达到。
3.Compared with A, B has given prominence to...（正文用于表示对比）
与A相比，B突出了……
4.Thus, one should always be serious at...（结尾段提出建议）
因此，人们应该认真地……

2 Nowadays there are many pirated products in the market, which is very harmful for us. What shall we do? Write a composition of about 200 words on the following topic: Say No to Pirated Products You are to write in three parts. In the first part, tell what you know about the pirated products in your country. In the second part, analyze the great harm caused by pirated products. In the last part, bring what you have written to a natural conclusion or make a summary.

参考答案：Say No to Pirated Products
At present, piracy is becoming unprecedentedly visible in China. Any products, like tapes, CDs and hitech devices, can be copied, not to mention books. Shortly after a newly-published book hits the shelves, people will unsurprisingly find its pirated counterparts in the stores.
It has been widely believed that piracy has caused a great loss to legitimate producers, inventors and authors in many ways. To start with, pirated products often cost much less than the original ones, so they enjoy unbeatable advantage in price in spite of their relatively poor quality. The original ones, on the contrary, sell badly. As far as pirated books are concerned, they do great harm to the authors' reputation due to their misprints. In the long run, pirated products may also have a negative impact on customers since those legitimate producers' enthusiasm may be greatly hurt by the fact that some customers are more inclined to purchase pirated products.
In my opinion, it's high time that the government called on everyone to start the battle against piracy. Besides, as customers, we should develop our consciousness to resist pirated products. And laws should be strictly carried out to ban piracy from spreading further. Only in this way can we put an end to piracy and create a healthy environment for both customers and producers.
系统解析：
范文点评：
本题属于“给定观点型”作文，涉及的题材是“社会热点”。要求考生就日益猖獗的盗版现象，分析原因和危害，并提出建议。根据题目要求，可谋篇布局如下：
开头：说明盗版现象的普遍和严重。
主体：分析造成盗版现象严重的原因及危害。
1.盗版虽质量低劣，但价格相对便宜，价格上的优势影响了正版的销售。
2.盗版书不仅侵犯了作者的版权而且损害作者的名誉。
3.盗版产品还会危害消费者的利益。
结尾：提出看法和建议。
1.政府严厉打击盗版。
2.消费者应自觉抵制盗版产品。
3.严格执法，阻止盗版的进一步蔓延。
句法点评：
1.At present, ...is becoming unprecedentedly visible in China.（首段表明事物的普遍性）
目前在中国，……随处可见，史无前例。
2.It has been widely believed that... has caused a great loss to... in many ways.（正文指出某事物造成的损害）
人们普遍认为，……在许多方面严重损害了……
3.Only in this way can we...（结尾段进行小结，倒装句式的使用显得句式灵活）
只有这样，我们才能……

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