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1 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the graph below. You should start your essay with a brief description of the graph and comment on China's achievements in urbanization. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

参考答案：China's Achievements in Urbanization
[1]As is demonstrated in the graph, at the end of 2019, urban residents in China accounted for 60.6% of the total population and it's the first time that the figure has exceeded 60%. Obviously, the past four decades have seen a sharp increase of 41.21% in the share of urban population in China.
[2]There's no denying that since the reform and opening up, remarkable achievements have been made in China's urbanization. [3]To begin with, the rapid urbanization has provided impetus for economic development, as it not only brings a sharp increase in demand for consumption and investment, but also generates a growing need for infrastructure, public services and housing. [4]Second, urbanization has created more job opportunities for ordinary people, especially for those migrant workers who move to urban areas, which has effectively improved people's living standards as a whole. [5]Third, in the process of urbanization, the uneven distribution of educational resources has also been alleviated to some extent.
[6] Even so, it is also worth mentioning that as more people enjoyed the prosperity of modern cities, we cannot ignore the mounting challenges urbanization has posed for national resources, environment, job market, public services, etc.
系统解析：
[1]简要地描述图表，并用相关数据予以说明，指出在过去的40年里，中国城市人口的比例急剧增长了41.21%。
[2]明确自己的观点，指出中国的城市化取得了显著的成就。
[3][4][5]分别使用to begin with、second、third从经济、就业以及教育三个方面具体阐述了中国城市化取得的成就。
[6]使用"Even so, it is also worth mentioning that..."总结全文，进一步表达了自己的观点。

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