六级写作历年真题第3关

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1 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 80 minutes to write an essay commenting on Alert Einstein's remark "I have no special talents. I am only passionately curious." You can give an example or two to illustrate your point of view. You should write at least 15 words but no more than 200 words.

参考答案：Doing Small Things in a Great Way
Throughout the ages, only a few people can climb the ladder of success to the top and be admired by the world. What may surprise us is that most people achieve success by doing small things in a great way. Just as the saying goes, "If you cannot do great things, do small things in a great way." That means one does not necessarily become a great man, but he can still be succcssful and win respect from others by doing common work in a perfect way.
Actually, history abounds with examples to prove this saying. The late CEO of Apple, Steve Jobs, is a case in point. He was so addicted to details that he could not stop pushing his staff to pursue perfection in design and production. It is due to his focus on small things that Apple has made great success in the mobile field, producing products that are not only innovative，but also superior.
As college students，we should keep in mind that it is of great necessity for us to enhance ourselves by doing small things perfectly. Only when all small things add up can many impossibilities be made possible.
系统解析：
范文第一，二句描述社会现象。范文第三句引出引言。范文第四句指出引言传达的信息。范文第六，七，八句以乔布斯为例说明做好小事情对成功的重要性。范文第九，十句得出结论并提出建议。

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