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1 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Occupation Orientation and Career Goal. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words according to the following guidelines: Senior undergraduates are facing career choices. To figure out your occupation orientation and career goal contributes to your career development. What should we do to develop a desirable career?

参考答案：Occupation Orientation and Career Goal
There is no doubt that job hunting is a grave problem with which college graduates are confronted. There are various reasons for graduates’ being increasingly difficult to secure an ideal job. For example, colleges and universities have enrolled so many students that the number of graduates is far greater than needed in the market. And the job vacancies are insufficient during the economic depression. Nevertheless, as far as I am concerned, the most critical factor is that a large number of college students haven’t figured out right occupation orientation or career goal before they really enter the society. In reality, both occupation orientation and career goal are crucial to one’s career development. If one intends to find an ideal job, here are several recommendations.
Above all, college students should seek their own orientation, analyze their personalities and find out their vocational interests, in order to know what jobs they are suitable for and capable of. Then full preparation should be made. Second, job hunters need to make all-round analysis of the job market and professional situation, finding a proper place after considering social needs and personal interests. What’s more, the graduates should set both long-term and short-term goals, making mature and rational choices according to different situations at different career development stages.
系统解析：
范文点评：
1.开篇简要说明客观事实：大学生找工作不易。
2.自然过渡，引出大学生难找工作的原因。
3.采用分点论证的方法，列举对职业定位和目标确定的建议和措施，恰如其分。
句法点评：
1. There is no doubt that job hunting is a grave problem with which college graduates are confronted.
开篇首句使用了There is no doubt that...句型，这是六级作文中阐述现象时常使用的句式，意为“毫无疑问，……”，类似的表达方法还有 There is no denying that...
2. If one intends to find an ideal job, here are several recommendations.
该句型是表达提出建议的常用句式。

2 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Measures to Alleviate the Traffic Pressure. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words according to the following guidelines: The rapid expansion of cities has caused numerous problems. Urban traffic pressure has perplexed citizens of most cities. In order to alleviate the increasing traffic pressure, we should take such measures as…

参考答案：Measures to Alleviate the Traffic Pressure
In recent years, traffic jam has become one of the growing concerns for the residents of most urban areas. Heavy transportation pressure in large cities may bring much inconvenience to people and even severely disturb our normal life. At the same time, it may exert negative impact on the environment. How to relieve the headache? The following measures may be effective.
Firstly, the government should adopt such policies as raising taxes on the purchase of private cars and allowing one family to buy at most one car, so as to limit the amount of private cars. Secondly, construction of public transportation such as buses and subways should be accelerated so that citizens find it more convenient and faster to take public transport than driving cars. Meanwhile, flexible working hours can be introduced, so that people can stagger the rush hours.
In a word, more than ever before, heavy traffic has become a source of headache for both the urban population and the city authorities. Serious as it is, traffic pressure can be alleviated sooner or later if the government can take the above effective measures and the public can pay more attention to their living environment.
系统解析：
范文点评：
1.开篇描述提纲的内容，指出客观事实。
2.自然过渡，引出缓解交通压力的举措，紧扣作文话题。
3.分点论述，条理清晰，论证有力。
4.末段总结全文，呼吁政府和公众共同应对交通压力问题。
句法点评：
1. Firstly, the government should adopt such policies as raising taxes on the purchase of private cars and allowing one family to buy at most one car, so as to limit the amount of private cars.
这句话中使用了such...as...这个结构，表示“像……这样的”或“诸如……之类的”，as后可接名词、动名词或从句。
2. In a word, more than ever before, heavy traffic has become a source of headache for both the urban population and the city authorities.
in a word是表示总结的常用表达，意为“总之”；more than ever before意为“比以往任何时候更……”，用在此处表示强调。

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