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1 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Being a Good Listener. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. People are often good talkers instead of good listeners. Being a good listener helps one become a better communicator. The ways to become a good listener.

参考答案：Being a Good Listener
Being a good listener is more and more difficult nowadays because people are often good talkers instead of good listeners. When we are happy, we will like to share happiness with others, making others know our enjoyment. But when we are not in good mood, we are in great need of someone who can listen to us.
Being a good listener helps one become a better communicator. A good listener not only listens to others, but also comforts them. To be a good listener can help us make good friends with others, and help us become a better communicator. Good listening also shows respect, promotes understanding, and improves interpersonal relationship. The one who listens to others will be easy going and people like to make friends with him. Whenever the listeners are stuck in trouble, their friends are willing to help them.
How to become a good listener? Each of us should listen more to others. Parents should listen more to their children to narrow the generation gap; teachers should listen more to their students to build a good relationship with them; students should listen more to their classmates to help and learn from each other.
系统解析：
范文点评：
1.开篇简述提纲第一个内容，人们倾向于做一个倾诉者而不是倾听者。
2.首段末句指出人们心情不好的时候，非常需要有人倾听自己的心声。
3.第二段首句将提纲中的第二个内容作为主题句展开论述，紧扣要求。
4.末段首句以设问的方式既提到了提纲中的第三个方面，同时也作为主题句论述如何成为好的倾听者。
句法点评：
1. A good listener not only listens to others, but also comforts them.
not only...but also结构的使用，加深了句子表达的含义，表递进关系。
2. Whenever the listeners are stuck in trouble, their friends are willing to help them.
由whenever引导的时间状语从句加强了表达的语气，whenever意为“每当”。

2 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled On Saving Electricity. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words according to the following guidelines: Energy demand is ever-increasing as world population grows. Household electricity accounts for a considerable fraction of world power and saving household electricity is significant for energy saving. To save electricity we should…

参考答案：On Saving Electricity
As word population grows, the energy demand is ever-increasing. And the lack of electricity is particularly conspicuous.
As household electricity accounts for a considerable fraction of electricity consumption, saving household electricity is significant for energy saving. However, the excessive using of industrial and urban household electricity, the lack of traditional raw material to generate electricity and the waste contribute to the lack of electricity. The problem needs to be settled instantly. Electricity is precious and we should save it not only for us, but also for our offsprings.
To save electricity, initially, we should raise awareness of saving electricity like reducing the using of electric lamp when unnecessary and turning off lights when leaving. Then call on more friends and family members to do so. Furthermore, use energy saving lamps as much as possible, which will make a great contribution to energy saving. Last, it should be encouraged to take advantage of more environmentally friendly raw material to generate electricity by government, which has less pollution to the environment.
系统解析：
范文点评：
1.开篇直接按照提纲第一点来写，简明扼要。
2.自然过渡，根据提纲第二点内容，阐明电力短缺产生的主要原因，并指出这一问题亟待解决的紧迫性。
3.末段按照提纲第三点，分三个层次阐述如何节约用电。
句法点评：
1. As household electricity accounts for a considerable fraction of electricity consumption, saving household electricity is significant for energy saving.
此为as引导的原因状语从句，表原因。
2. Electricity is precious and we should save it not only for us, but also for our offsprings.
句中not only...but also...结构的使用，增强语气的同时，丰富了文章的句式结构。

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