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1 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark “Experience without learning is better than learning without experience.” You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you can do to make yourself more experienced. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

参考答案：“Experience without learning is better than learning without experience.” The saying means that experience is of vital importance and one can have only learning with no experience. It stresses the importance of experience.
I totally agree with that. Successful people are willing to learn from their experience immediately. They know that failure is the mother of success. Whenever they fail, after introspecting for a while, they can learn a lot from their experience. Doing this, they can know the mistakes and make some changes. Then they will start again and continue struggling for success. They do know the importance of experience. So what can you do to make yourself more experienced?
For my part, it is worthwhile for senior university students to spend some time acquiring experience in vocational and volunteer activities, which will provide us with the necessary workplace skills and experience, boost our appeal in the eyes of employers because the activities can build our strength of character and reveal an innate desire to work. There’s no doubt that we’ll be afforded a unique edge over the majority of our contemporaries.
系统解析：
范文点评：
1.开篇简要解释给定话语的含义，同时结合话语含义给出其要说明的观点：经验的重要性。
2.第二段首句明确表达自己的观点：赞同经验很重要。
3.以成功人士的经验为例，论述经验的重要性。
4.以大学生为例，论述如何让自己经验丰富，并提供切实可行的做法。
句法点评：
1. They do know the importance of experience.
此句中用了“do+动词原形”表示强调的结构，增加了句式的多样性。
2. For my part, it is worthwhile for senior university students to spend some time acquiring experience in vocational and volunteer activities, which will provide us with the necessary workplace skills and experience，boost our appeal in the eyes of employers because the activities can build our strength of character and reveal an innate desire to work.
此句结构复杂，首先用了it作形式主语的结构it is worthwhile for senior university students to spend...；其次用了which 引导的非限制性定语从句which will provide us with…，还用了because引导的原因状语从句because the activities...to work，句式多样复杂，但却一气呵成。

2 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay on the distinction between school and life by referring to the saying “The difference between school and life? In school, you’re taught a lesson and then given a test. In life, you are given a test that teaches you a lesson.” You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

参考答案：There is a saying that goes “The difference between school and life? In school, you’re taught a lesson and, then given a test. In life, you are given a test that teaches you a lesson.” That is right. School is tolerant but life is harsh.
In school, you are a student and your main task is to learn and acquire knowledge. Giving tests is just a measure to see whether you have mastered the knowledge or not. If not, you can make up for it. This method is moderate, and so school is tolerant.
Compared to school, life is complicated. You are tested on all kinds of abilities, such as viability, sociability, learning ability, capacity for work, etc. There is no rehearsal in life. Every day is a live show. If you succeed, you will harvest joy. If you fail, you will be taught a lesson. So, life is harsh.
But because of these differences, school time is so memorable and our life becomes so colorful. So, please cherish school time and don’t let it slip idly by; please face life bravely as it is wonderful whether we lose or win.
系统解析：
范文点评：
1.首句开门见山，直接引入名人名言，提炼出这句名言所要表达的观点，进而引出本文的话题，即学校和生活的区别。
2.分两个层次深入分析为什么学校和生活有如此大的差别。
3.文章没有止步于表面，末段对主题作进一步深化和总结，提出了自己的观点。
句法点评：
1. Giving tests is just a measure to see whether you have mastered the knowledge or not.
if和whether都可以引导宾语从句，但是句中有or not存在的时候只能用whether，不能用if。 2. So, please cherish school time and don’t let it slip idly by; please face life bravely as it is wonderful whether we lose or win. 本句使用了whether...or ..的结构，意为“无论，不管......还是......”。

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