系统解析:范文点评:
1.开篇简要解释名言的含义,指出坚持才能胜利。
2.引出坚持是通向成功之路这一论点,紧扣作文话题。
3.反面论证:指出一夜成名不可取。
4.举例论证坚持的重要性,论据充分,论证有力。
5.例证后作进一步的分析,论述坚持的含义。
6.末段重申观点,再次强调坚持的重要性。
句法点评:
1. The famous remark “He laughs best who laughs last,” which is known to us all, means that only people who are persistent can finally achieve success.
本句主干是The famous remark means that...,而“He laughs best who laughs last”是remark的同位语,that引导宾语从句;句中which引导非限制性定语从句,补充说明“He laughs best who laughs last”,that引导的宾语从句中又包含了who引导的定语从句。
2. Many people who failed did not know how close they were to success when they gave up.
此句短小精悍,用到了Who引导的定语从句,how引导的宾语从句,when引导的状语从句,句式变化多样。