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1 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Seizing the Moment by commenting on the famous saying "The best preparation for tomorrow is to do good work today." You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

参考答案：Seizing the Moment
Just as H·Jackson Brown Jr. says, the best preparation for tomorrow is to do good work today. Excellent achievements will be made only when we seize the moment and make full preparations.
As we all know, chances favor only the prepared minds, and preparations demand great efforts. For example, Tai Lihua, the prestigious dumb dancer, loved dancing when she was in middle school. She struggled hard against her fate of being dumb and flung herself into dancing. She sought hope out of despair and succeeded at last. Such example can also be found in nature. Young hawks practice many times before they spread their wings to fly in the sky. Being prepared today makes us full of confidence and endows us with strong power to embrace success tomorrow.
No pains, no gains. Full preparations of today are essential and will result in success in the future.
系统解析：
1.首段通过名言“对明天最好的准备就是今天把工作做好“引入本文主题：做好当下。
2.中间段举例论证刻苦努力对于成功的重要性。
3.末段总结全文，重申主题。

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