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1 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Training Classes following the outline given below. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

参考答案：Training Classes
At present, some people are busy attending all kinds of training classes which cover a wide range of fields such as foreign languages, computer, chess and music.
There are mainly three aspects accounting for the popularity of training classes. First of all，in the information age, more and more people are aware of the necessity of broadening their horizons, which can be attained through attending some special training courses. More importantly, for most people, training classes can help them become more competent to achieve their goals. Finally, as the living standard improves, more and more people regard training courses as good leisure activities.
Reflecting on the popularity of training classes, I suggest we take into consideration its negative effects on people, young students in particular. It is true that when young kids are pressured to take all manner of training courses, they will lose their freedom, happiness, and creativity in the long run.
系统解析：
1.首段指出许多人热衷于参加各种培训班这一社会现象。
2.中间段分析培训班受欢迎的原因。
3.末段阐述自己的观点：我们要考虑到培训班的负面影响。

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