四级写作四级写作模拟题第49关

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1 Directions: For this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the importance of children's right to privacy. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

参考答案：Children's Right to Privacy
In this picture, a mother is curious about her daughter's privacy, while the daughter wants to keep her own privacy. It is quite common in Chinese families that parents always want to probe into the privacy of their children in the name of love and protection. Under such circumstances, children always feel uncomfortable.
From my personal perspective, we should protect children's privacy. First of all, children are independent human beings, so parents should respect their right to privacy. Secondly, invasion of children's privacy would hurt their self-esteem, shake their confidence and worsen the parent-child relationship. Thirdly, children need relatively free space for their development and parents should never deprive them of this right.
As far as I am concerned, one's privacy, men or women, the old or the young, should be well protected. Parents should never infringe upon their children's right to privacy in the name of love.
系统解析：
1.首段描述图片内容，并说明许多家长经常以爱和保护的名义打探自己孩子的隐私。
2.中间段分三点分析保护孩子隐私的必要性。
3.末段总结全文，指出任何人的隐私都应该得到保护。

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