四级写作四级写作模拟题第48关

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1 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the importance of keeping a balance among different subjects. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

参考答案：Keeping a Balance Among Different Subjects
The picture vividly reflects a very typical and realistic situation of Chinese students in learning. Nowadays, some students focus too much attention on the learning of English while other courses such as Chinese and mathematics are somewhat neglected.
As far as I'm concerned, this situation should be avoided for the following reasons. Firstly, as students, we should acquire comprehensive knowledge. Too much focus on English would certainly hinder our overall development. Secondly, Chinese is our mother tongue which deserves our attention, and we should never neglect it. Last but not least, different subjects have different functions. Mathematics helps us cultivate a rational way of thinking; Chinese is our native language; and English can make us eloquent in international communication.
All in all, we should keep a balance among different subjects. Only in this way can we get allround development.
系统解析：
1.首段描述图片的内容，并指出有的学生过于注重英语的学习，而忽视了语文、数学及其他科目的学习。
2.中间段指出应避免这一现象的发生，并从三个方面进行论证。
3.末段总结全文，指出我们应该平衡各科目的学习，这样才能得到全面的发展。

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