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Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay based on the picture below. You should focus on the pros and cons of delaying retirement. You are required to write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

  • 参考答案:On Delaying Retirement
    The picture depicts a boss asking his employee to legally alter his age to 25 so that he cannot retire from work, which reveals an issue of delaying retirement, a disputable topic in recent years in China. For me, we should look at the issue dialectically.
    To begin with, there are many advantages of delaying retirement. Firstly, with the extension of human life span, we can make full use of human resources by delaying retirement since it takes much time and money to cultivate a highly-educated person. Secondly, delaying retirement can increase the amount of pension after retirement, reducing the financial burden of young generation to support their parents. However, every coin has two sides. Delaying retirement might intensify the competition of job market, making it harder for young people to find a job. As a result, it is the responsibility of government to increase employment opportunities.
    In a word, we should not simply label the new situation as good or bad, but explore it in great depth and adjust to it both physically and mentally.
  • 系统解析:
    1.首段描述图片内容,然后由图片引申出延迟退休的话题。
    2.中间段论述退休的利弊。
    3.末段总结全文,指出我们应该在身体上和心理上适应新的形势。
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