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1 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Actions Speak Louder than Words. You can cite examples to illustrate how you understand the above saying. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

参考答案：Actions Speak Louder than Words
Just as the saying goes, “Actions speak louder than words.” It emphasizes the importance of actions. Everything will become a daydream without actions.
The parent who tells a child not to smoke and then lights a cigarette is unlikely to convince his child of the harmful effect of smoking. Therefore, children whose parents smoke are more likely to become smokers. Some people always complain about the traffic jams, but they don’t stop at the red light. So the traffic jam still exists. Only when we take actions can we make a difference in whatever we hope to accomplish. Otherwise, what we hope will remain a daydream. Actions will enable us to achieve our objectives more smoothly and realize our dreams more rapidly. The more actions we take, the more likely we are to accumulate experience, master skills and get close to our destination.
Therefore, we should cherish beautiful dreams, but what’s more important is that we should take actions to make the dreams come true. Anyway, actions speak louder than words.
系统解析：
范文点评：
1.开篇简要描述谚语的内容，提出论点。
2.采用浅显的例子论证论点，紧扣作文主题。
3.末段总结全文，重申观点，再次强调只有采取行动，才能使梦想成真。
句法点评：
1. The parent who tells a child not to smoke and then lights a cigarette is unlikely to convince his child of the harmful effect of smoking.
本句主干为The parent is unlikely to convince his child of the harmful effect of smoking，主语the parent后面跟了一个who引导的定语从句。
2. Only when we take actions can we make a difference in whatever we hope to accomplish.
本句采用倒装，使得句式结构灵活变化。only修饰的介词短语或状语从句放在句首，句子（主句）谓语部分采用半倒装的结构，助动词或情态动词要提到主语的前面，如本句中can we make a difference。

2 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on language learning by commenting on the quote, "Learning any language takes a lot of effort，but don’t give up." You can cite examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

参考答案：When it comes to language learning, different people have different opinions. In my opinion, the most important way to learn languages is to make efforts and don’t give up.
Firstly, learning a language takes time. You must ensure that you have enough time to make a lot of efforts to learn it. The more time you spend on the language, the faster you will learn. But it isn’t equal to the time when you just sit in class but actually listen to the music. This means devoting your time to learning a language enjoyably. Secondly, one should be able to persevere. It is unavoidable that you will meet obstacles, but never give up. Don’t worry about what you cannot remember, understand, or express. It doesn’t matter. As long as you keep learning, you will make improvements. You will gradually have a clearer picture of the language in your brain.
Therefore, when you learn a language, you must be willing to spend time on it and make efforts to learn it. Anyway, don’t give up when encountering difficulties. Perseverance will finally pay off.
系统解析：
范文点评：
1.开篇引入语言学习这一话题，并以解析引言的方式表达自己的观点。
2.从两个方面论证自己的观点，论据充分，论证有力。
3.末段总结全文，重申观点。
句法点评：
1. The more time you spend on the language, the faster you will learn.
比较句的一种，使文章句子更加灵活多变，意为“越……越……”。
2. You will gradually have a clearer picture of the language in your brain.
本句中have a clearer picture of是一个惯用表达方式，意为“对......有更加清晰的了解”。

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