系统解析:范文点评:
1.开篇明确提出争议焦点:该制定切合实际的计划,还是富有挑战性的计划?
2.就上文提到的争议,表明自己倾向于切合实际的计划。
3.阐述第一个理由:挑战性计划具有不可预测性,而保守计划更切合实际。
4.第二个理由:切合实际的计划能与个人能力更完美地四配。
5.第三个理由:切合实际的计划更容易实现,让人们受到鼓舞;反之,人们容易受挫,不易成功。
6.呼应上文,重申观点。
句法点评:
1. Making a challenging plan or a practical plan for one’s future becomes the bone of contention as more and more people prefer to plan their lives in advance.
本句主干为主系表结构,making引导的动名词短语做主语,表语是bone of contention。需要注意,本句中as引导原因状语从句。又如:I don’t know how to get to the railway station as I am new here. 我不知道怎么去火车站,因为我刚到这里。
2. Therefore, from my perspective, I would like to suggest people craft a practical plan considering that it can contribute to their final success and promise them a better future.
在本句中使用了suggest接that宾语从句表建议的句型(that可省略),宾语从句中谓语动词需用should +do (动词原形)的结构,should可以省略,表示“建议某人做某事”。 considering that...意为“考虑到……,鉴于……”,considering为现在分词,that引导宾语从句。又如:I suggest we telephone her in an hour. 我建议我们一个小时后再给她打电话。/ Considering that she was old, he sent her to a nursing home.考虑到她已经年迈,他把她送到了养老院。